Monday, November 13, 2017

Journal writing in 2J: As the door slammed I knew... Please read and leave a comment.

As the door slamed I knew that the lights flickerd there after they turned of. Suddenly I heard loud footsteps. I tried going back to sleep but I couldn't. I was frightened then I tried going back to sleep but I still couldn't. It was eventually my mother she whispered, 'The power just turned of.
By Selena


As the door slammed I knew that someone or something was lurching  around the house. I turned one way then the other. As I  turned I heard noises. I was super scared. At least I was just my cat and the floor creaking.
By Finn


As the door slammed I knew it was a spooky ghost I shrugged. The ghost was hunting
for me so I ran and ran I ran as fast as I could but it was still after me. Then it magically
disappeared. By Marcus




As the door slammed I knew water was coming from down the door. I opened the door and saw three pipes. It was spraying water everywhere. I turned off the three pipes. It stopped spraying water everywhere.  By Kylie




As soon as the door slammed I knew something bad had happened. I swung the door opened but there wasn't a sound heard. Slower then a baby crawling, I tip-toed down the staircase silence.
It was morning and breakfast was ready so I ate. After eating my breakfast, I slowly walked to the bathroom to take a shower. Just before I started to walk, everybody surprised me.
by Meldaan

14 comments:

  1. Great little stories 2J.IssieπŸ‘πŸ»

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  2. i really like them! They're amazing
    amitya

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  3. These are interesting stories and I really like Marcus’ story!πŸ‘πŸ»(By patrick)

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  4. These are interesting stories and I really like Marcus’ story!πŸ‘πŸ»(By patrick)

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  5. These are interesting stories and I really like Marcus’ story!����(By patrick)

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  6. I really like your story Marcus. the ghost would be scary.
    Evie :):):):):):)::):):):)

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    1. I really like Finn's story.
      By Marcus

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  7. Wow Marcus - that ghost must have been really scary!!

    Evie

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  8. they are very interesting and I like all of them

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  9. Great journal entries 2J.By Marcus

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