Was when I travelled to a beautiful holiday house. It was next to a wonderful beach. I also liked it because the house had a clear clean view from the window. It was at Smiths Lake. I had lots of fun there
Ollen
The best day of my life was in the last holidays when I went to Legoland in Denmark. I learned how to drive a car.
Marc
The best day of my life was going to the U.S.A and having lots of fun.
Thomas
The best day of my life was when I was in Tokyo in a theme park. The theme park was based on Disney characters. I walked around the park with my cousins and the rest of my family. I sat some amazing rides. I also bought a rabbit bag from the souvenir shop. I had lots of fun there.
Alyssa
The best day of my life was when it was my fifth birthday. I enjoyed my birthday because they played the game I wanted to play. We played duck duck goose first. Then, we ate the cake.
Zoe
The best day of my life was celebrating my cousin's birthday because we had a piece of chocolate cake and played games in the park.
Celine
Monday, October 31, 2016
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Tuesday, October 25, 2016
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Monday, October 24, 2016
Week 3 : The worst day of my life... Please read and leave a comment!
The worst day of my life was last year, when I was at Wet'n'Wild On the Gold Coast .I was waiting to go on the river rapids when my sister pushed my down when the light was still red. I did a humongous splash when I landed in the pool. I was in so much pain but I pulled through it.
Sabrina
The worst day of my life was last Friday because I started a writing booklet. I have to do one page a day. I'm supposed to be on my fourth day but I'm on my fifth page.
Ian
The worst day of my life was when my cousin put my favourite toy into the pool. I felt sad and angry.
Celine
The worst day of my life was when I went to the shops with my mum. My mum lost her card for the shops. She had to pay $60 , to get out of the carpark. She got very angry at me. It happened when I was in year 1.
Ollen
Sabrina
The worst day of my life was last Friday because I started a writing booklet. I have to do one page a day. I'm supposed to be on my fourth day but I'm on my fifth page.
Ian
The worst day of my life was when my cousin put my favourite toy into the pool. I felt sad and angry.
Celine
The worst day of my life was when I went to the shops with my mum. My mum lost her card for the shops. She had to pay $60 , to get out of the carpark. She got very angry at me. It happened when I was in year 1.
Ollen
Thursday, October 20, 2016
Annibal and yannis have written fabulous narratives. Please read and leave a comment.
Text Type: Narrative
Procedure: To entertain the reader
Audience: Year 2J and visitors
The Robot
Batteries
There was a
submarine moving along the rough and cold ocean floor. The long submarine carried
a little boy named Tim. With the five year old boy there was also a friendly
and electrifying robot.
While they
were under the ocean playing with their plastic toys, the robot´s old batteries
accidentally ran out.
Suddenly the
robot shut down frantically.
Luckily Tim
had two spare batteries that the funny robot could borrow, and he placed the
clean batteries carefully back on the robot.
`Oh no’, yelled the worried boy. ‘We don´t have enough batteries´! The
robot opened his eyes slowly. Tim and the robot rushed to their onboard base.
There they had a miniature submarine stored.
Tim drove while the robot was being an annoying co-pilot. The little
submarine had an onboard arm that could grab heavy objects.
`Now all we have to do is find some batteries´. Tim exclaimed
contentedly.
`There´s one´ mentioned the anxious robot.
The battery was moving (they didn´t know why).
They just grabbed the battery.
When their path lightened the robot looked backwards.
`Watch out, a bulb-fish´! The alarmed robot gasped.
They tried to trick the ginormous fish.
`Look´ the robot shrieked. 'A narrow path´!
Tim drove through the narrow path with the fish in close pursuit.
The fish crashed into the narrow path, an
Tim and the robot grabbed the
battery.
`We’re safe´! the robot expressed.
Anibal
WALT: To
write a good narrative.
Text type:
Narrative
Purpose: To
entertain the reader
Audience: 2J
and Visitors
The Bridge
In
Queensland lived two poor boys named James and Jimmy. James and Jimmy were
tramps. Their parents died when they were little. The two poor boys were so
skinny that they looked like sticks! It was a wet Friday afternoon when Jimmy
found a beautiful apple tree.
“Finally
Food” Jimmy shouted excitedly.
James ran
towards Jimmy and they both gazed at the apple tree.
“Lets go”
James cried as he ran towards the bridge that led him to the apple tree.
When James
was halfway along the bridge, an ugly, fierce ogre jumped up in front of him.
“This is my
bridge and who ever crosses my bridge will be part of my supper”, the ogre
roared.
James was
terrified. He bowed down to the ogre and cried “ Oh please Mr Ogre please,
please, please let me pass, I’m just a little tramp”.
“No, unless
you let me be your boss” the ogre shouted furiously.
Without
thinking twice James shouted “Yes, be my boss”.
The ogre
game a huge grin and let James pass. After gathering all the beautiful apples
he gave some to his brother, Jimmy. The apples were delicious. They were sweet.
Years later
the ogre started to be nice to them. He gave them delicious food and
fashionable clothes. James and Jimmy were so happy, they were never sad again.
Yannis
Tuesday, October 18, 2016
Monday, October 17, 2016
Week 2 journal entries. When I grow up I want to be a...
WALT: to write a journal correctly
When I grow up I would like to be an Olympic athlete like Usain Bolt and run really fast like him. I would like to be an Olympics athlete because I could enter track and field and achieve a silver medal. Usain Bolt is my favourite Olympic athlete and that is why I want to be an Olympics athlete.
Dane
When I grow up I would like to be a teacher because I could teach children about subjects for example: maths. My dad said he also wanted to be a teacher. My sister want to be a singer and mum prefers to be a homemaker. When I became a teacher, I will make children happy.
Zoe
When I grow up would like to be a police man because my dad is one to.
Thomas
When I grow up I want to be a vet because I like animals. I really want to help sick and injured animals. I am not scared of blood or injections so I think I will make a very good vet. When I grow up I also want to be a author because I like reading and writing interesting books. I like writing because you can share your imagination with other people.
Yannis
When I grow up I would like to be a captain of a cruise ship. I would like to be a captain of a cruise ship because I would get lots of money. I would also like to drive a cruise boat because I would be helping people go on holidays and I would like them to enjoy the cruise.
Oliver
When I grow up I would like to be a doctor. I want to be a doctor because I could look after my parents when they are very ill. I can look after anyone. I'll be open 247. 247 means when I am open 24 hours every day.
Ksenia
When I grow up I would like to be an author. I would like to be an author because you learn and write at the same time. e.g visit the Great Barrier Reef then you can write an imaginative story on it. When you arrive back at home you can publish the story.
Alyssa
When I grow up would like to be a builder, because then I can build houses. On weekends I could have a break and build different things like bird homes and things.
Alexis
When I grow up I would like to be a school nurse because I would like to help students who are hurt.
Celine
When I grow up I would like to be an Olympic athlete like Usain Bolt and run really fast like him. I would like to be an Olympics athlete because I could enter track and field and achieve a silver medal. Usain Bolt is my favourite Olympic athlete and that is why I want to be an Olympics athlete.
Dane
When I grow up I would like to be a teacher because I could teach children about subjects for example: maths. My dad said he also wanted to be a teacher. My sister want to be a singer and mum prefers to be a homemaker. When I became a teacher, I will make children happy.
Zoe
When I grow up would like to be a police man because my dad is one to.
Thomas
When I grow up I want to be a vet because I like animals. I really want to help sick and injured animals. I am not scared of blood or injections so I think I will make a very good vet. When I grow up I also want to be a author because I like reading and writing interesting books. I like writing because you can share your imagination with other people.
Yannis
When I grow up I would like to be a captain of a cruise ship. I would like to be a captain of a cruise ship because I would get lots of money. I would also like to drive a cruise boat because I would be helping people go on holidays and I would like them to enjoy the cruise.
Oliver
When I grow up I would like to be a doctor. I want to be a doctor because I could look after my parents when they are very ill. I can look after anyone. I'll be open 247. 247 means when I am open 24 hours every day.
Ksenia
When I grow up I would like to be an author. I would like to be an author because you learn and write at the same time. e.g visit the Great Barrier Reef then you can write an imaginative story on it. When you arrive back at home you can publish the story.
Alyssa
When I grow up would like to be a builder, because then I can build houses. On weekends I could have a break and build different things like bird homes and things.
Alexis
When I grow up I would like to be a school nurse because I would like to help students who are hurt.
Celine
Saturday, October 15, 2016
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Monday, October 10, 2016
The Best thing about the holidays was... Week 1 Journal entries. Please read and leave a comment.
WALT: To write a good journal entry.
The best thing about the holidays was when my family and I drove to Muswellbrook. On our trip we stopped at Singleton, Widden and scone. We stayed at a hotel named Noah's Hotel.
The trip took three hours so my sister and I watched movies on the way.
My family and I did a walk around the little country town. I had lots of fun there. We travelled there by car.
Anibal
WALT: write a journal entry that makes sense.
The best thing about the holidays was horse riding. I really like horse riding because it was really fun and I learnt a lot about horses. I travelled there by car with my family friends Valerie and Esther. When we arrived, we learnt how to ride a horse. My horse was called Maccer. Next we learnt how to wash and groom a horse. Then I learnt to feed the horse. The food smelt disgusting.
When we finished we played games on our horse. One of the games were called spin around the world. Spin around the world was the game I hated the most.
Yannis
The best things about the holidays were my 8th birthday. I also liked it when my family drove to Kiama Blowhole. I liked my birthday because I received great birthday presents. My sister gave me three bags of dirt. My birthday cake was shaped as a pirate's head.
Riley
The best thing about the holidays was going to Port Stephens and suburb of Corlette in Nelson Bay. I travelled there with my mum , dad, grandma and two of my friends. We also visited Salamander Bay. it was phenomenal because we saw lots of dolphins.
It took two and a half hours.
Emilia
The best thing about the holidays was the museum. I travelled to the museum because I wanted to see lots of paintings. There names were called Frinda and Diego. I travelled with my Uncle and Auntie and my Mum and Dad. The paintings were beautiful. Sofia
The best thing about the holidays were traveling to foster.It is a little town located in Sydney. Our transportation was by car.it was a three hour drive. Our hotel was called Beaches International. We were there because my grandma's honeymoon was there .We stayed there for five days.
Sabrina
The best thing about the holidays was my family drove to the shops. I travelled to the shops because I was going ice-skating. I fell over ten times. My father told me I was falling over ten times because I was trying really hard. I also thought catching a bus with my brother to watch the movie STORKS was awesome.
Lily
The best thing about the holidays was that, my family and I travelled to Creeks Point Reserve. I travelled to there because I was celebrating Emilia's 8th birthday party. We both played fairies and castles and we ate sausage rolls. I saw the Harbour Bridge.
Ksenia
The best thing about the holidays was when I went to Melbourne to visit my cousins Benji and Leah. We all visited Luna Park. Benji and I got to ride on the ghost train ride. I cried after the ride because
it was scary. After the ghost train all of us wanted to go on the spider ride. it was really fun.
Alexis
The best thing about the holidays was going swimming at the Aquatic Centre in Ryde. There were big waves and a slide. I learned how to do the front flip in the deep and touching the floor in the deep. My cousins and my family were there. I had lots of fun swimming with my cousins and my brother.
Celine
The best thing about the holidays was when I drove to Kangaroo Valley. At Kangaroo Valley we were sleeping in a tent (camping) and fishing. My family caught no fish. The water was dirty. The place was called Grady's Riverside Retreat. I slept there for two nights and one day. It was three hours to drive there.
Jessica
The best thing about the holidays was when my family and I drove to Muswellbrook. On our trip we stopped at Singleton, Widden and scone. We stayed at a hotel named Noah's Hotel.
The trip took three hours so my sister and I watched movies on the way.
My family and I did a walk around the little country town. I had lots of fun there. We travelled there by car.
Anibal
WALT: write a journal entry that makes sense.
The best thing about the holidays was horse riding. I really like horse riding because it was really fun and I learnt a lot about horses. I travelled there by car with my family friends Valerie and Esther. When we arrived, we learnt how to ride a horse. My horse was called Maccer. Next we learnt how to wash and groom a horse. Then I learnt to feed the horse. The food smelt disgusting.
When we finished we played games on our horse. One of the games were called spin around the world. Spin around the world was the game I hated the most.
Yannis
The best things about the holidays were my 8th birthday. I also liked it when my family drove to Kiama Blowhole. I liked my birthday because I received great birthday presents. My sister gave me three bags of dirt. My birthday cake was shaped as a pirate's head.
Riley
The best thing about the holidays was going to Port Stephens and suburb of Corlette in Nelson Bay. I travelled there with my mum , dad, grandma and two of my friends. We also visited Salamander Bay. it was phenomenal because we saw lots of dolphins.
It took two and a half hours.
Emilia
The best thing about the holidays was the museum. I travelled to the museum because I wanted to see lots of paintings. There names were called Frinda and Diego. I travelled with my Uncle and Auntie and my Mum and Dad. The paintings were beautiful. Sofia
The best thing about the holidays were traveling to foster.It is a little town located in Sydney. Our transportation was by car.it was a three hour drive. Our hotel was called Beaches International. We were there because my grandma's honeymoon was there .We stayed there for five days.
Sabrina
The best thing about the holidays was my family drove to the shops. I travelled to the shops because I was going ice-skating. I fell over ten times. My father told me I was falling over ten times because I was trying really hard. I also thought catching a bus with my brother to watch the movie STORKS was awesome.
Lily
The best thing about the holidays was that, my family and I travelled to Creeks Point Reserve. I travelled to there because I was celebrating Emilia's 8th birthday party. We both played fairies and castles and we ate sausage rolls. I saw the Harbour Bridge.
Ksenia
The best thing about the holidays was when I went to Melbourne to visit my cousins Benji and Leah. We all visited Luna Park. Benji and I got to ride on the ghost train ride. I cried after the ride because
it was scary. After the ghost train all of us wanted to go on the spider ride. it was really fun.
Alexis
The best thing about the holidays was going swimming at the Aquatic Centre in Ryde. There were big waves and a slide. I learned how to do the front flip in the deep and touching the floor in the deep. My cousins and my family were there. I had lots of fun swimming with my cousins and my brother.
Celine
The best thing about the holidays was when I drove to Kangaroo Valley. At Kangaroo Valley we were sleeping in a tent (camping) and fishing. My family caught no fish. The water was dirty. The place was called Grady's Riverside Retreat. I slept there for two nights and one day. It was three hours to drive there.
Jessica
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