The Black Hole
“Get the
latest news…!” a man in the LCD TV announced. Hi my name is Ash I am a 12 year
old boy. Yesterday for me was a hectic day and I will never forget it.
My house had
been robbed by The Wolf Gang. They
were the most wanted criminals in England. Everybody knew about them but not
their secret weapon of doom.
My mum and I
had to run some errands for my aunt. This was the biggest mistake we ever made.
Somehow the Wolf Gang heard us and
decided to rob our house. Even though he had locked our house 10 times! Still
they managed to brake in.
When we got
back from shopping our house looked normal. There was a TV, a computer, three
beds, and a bathroom. Everything was normal …….. Except all my mum’s secret
money had vanished!!!! How? We had locked our house ten times and all the
windows were closed. My mom only had 10 dollars left, and on that note was the
sign of the head of Wolf Gang. His
name was Jayden aka Wolf Father. He had established the Wolf Gang.
I decided to
go and find the Wolf Gang. I knew I
would fail, but I had to do it, I had to do it for my mum. I bet you are now
thinking how would a 12 year old boy,
like me pull of such thing. Well I’ll tell you. My dad was a detective,
until he died. So detective blood ran through my family veins. I started off at
our house I suspected that if the Wolf
Gang could hear us that meant they lived nearby. I decided to check the
abandoned house that was next to our place.
I checked in
the house. The door opened. I had never felt that scared before in my life. I
had gone inside. There was only one window. I could see some people. They had a
black circle with them. I was looking when suddenly a man saw me…..
Ibrahim
Purpose: to entertain
Text Type: narrative
Audience: 5/6J and visitors
Audience: 5/6J and visitors
The Black Hole
It was
just a normal day. The sun was shining and the children were playing at the
local park. That night when I as watching the news with my friends Lucy and
Lauren, they announced that in China, America and England a black hole had
appeared from nowhere and that scientists did not know what it was or where it
came from.
I first
thought that someone could just be playing a trick so I did not worry about it.
The next day when I woke up I looked out of my window and saw a black hole up
in the sky. First I thought that my brain was playing a trick on me but then
when I asked my mum if she could see the black hole. She told me that she
could. I was so scared that I did not know what to do so I ran over to Lucy's
house. When I arrived at her house she was so terrified that she had forgotten
her own name. After a while, when we were talking about the black hole, she
told me that the one in China had grown bigger.
Later
that day when I was watching the news they announced that a group of scientists
was trying to find out where the black hole had come from. The scientists
assured the public that they would get rid of it. I was so happy to hear the
great news that I called Lucy and Lauren immediately. That night I could not
sleep because of what they had said on the news. I was so happy
A few
weeks later the black hole was still in the sky. It was not getting bigger or
smaller. When I was leaving the house that day for school, I realised that the
black hole had disappeared. It was gone. When I was at school everyone was
talking about the black hole and how no one knew what happened to it, even the
scientists. Since then, we still don't know what happened to the black hole, but
everyone is glad that it is gone for good.
Talia
Text type: Narrative
Purpose: To entertain the reader
Audience: 5/6J and visitors
The Black Hole
I was watching an amazing cartoon when an
advertisement came up. I whined “Why do these silly, annoying advertisements
come up when I am in the middle of an awesome cartoon?”
I saw an advertisement saying that there was a new
movie in the cinemas. I really craved to see that movie with Tom who was my
best friend. I had Tom on the line and told him about the movie. I asked him “Do
you want to watch it today with me?”
He exclaimed “Sure.”
He exclaimed “Sure.”
I told him that I was going to go to his house in
the afternoon and then we’d go to the cinemas.
That afternoon I headed off to Tom’s house. He
seemed even more excited than I was. He was so excited that his hands were
trembling. We both told Tom’s mother where we were going when I suddenly
remembered that we needed money to buy tickets. We begged Tom’s mother so much
for money that she was forced to give us some. We shouted excitedly “Thank
you!”
We had just started off for the cinemas when
something unfamiliar happened. A big black hole appeared and it was blocking
the footpath. “What are we going to do?” I asked Tom.
Before he could respond we both felt a hand push. I
turned around but it was too late. We
were in the black hole. I caught a glimpse and I thought that I saw Jayden who
was the meanest bully at our school.
“Great!” I shouted out loudly “If it wasn’t for
Jayden then we wouldn’t be here.” Exclaimed Tom.
That’s when we saw lots of people staring at us.
They looked just like the people in their dimension. “Where are we?” I asked.
“You are in the future.” Another voice exclaimed.
That is when I saw another Tom and as well as
myself. In fact I saw everyone who lived in our town, including that repulsive
Jayden.
“We’re going to be here for a long while, Tom.” I
exclaimed. Then I realised that we were in the future so we could see what
would happen in the future. That’s when we saw a sign saying “MISSING
CHILDREN!” “That’s us!” exclaimed Tom.
There was a mysterious door. I asked one of the
towns people “What is this door for?”
He replied “I can’t tell you that”
“Why?” I responded. Then he told me to mind my own business.
“Why?” I responded. Then he told me to mind my own business.
“How are we going to return to the past? The other
Tom and I overheard us and told us that the only way to go back to the past was
by going through the door that we were talking about earlier. Then we exclaimed
“Thank you.” Suddenly an odd man stopped us but the other Tom and I stopped
him. Suddenly an odd man stopped us but the other Tom and I stopped him. We
exclaimed to them “Thank you and bye.”
When we got back into our dimension we saw posters
saying “MISSING CHILDREN!” We both wondered how many days had passed. We then
decided to both go home and we exclaimed “Bye.”
When I arrived home, I hugged my parents and I
found myself in front of the TV so I watched some TV but in my mind I was
wondering “Could that really have been Jayden as I thought?”
Ishan
I jumped in “phew” I was back at my
dad’s work. It was time to go home. What a story I’ll have to tell when I
arrive home.
Text type:
Narrative
Purpose: To
entertain the reader
Audience:
year 5/6J and visitors
The Black Hole
“Oh boy”
mumbled Michael
I have to go
to my dad’s work, boring. Just then we jumped out of the car “whoa” announced
Michael excitedly what a spectacular building I shouting to my dad “come on
lets go”
I raced up
the stairs, down the hall and into my dad’s office. He asked me to print
something out on the photocopier I walked slowly to the printer feeling nervous
I saw many people working. When I arrived at the printer a black circle came
out on the paper I put my hand in on the paper it was actually a black hole. I
placed down onto down onto the desk. I stood back and took a big jump into it.
I was in there for a while.
When I
eventually came out of the hole I found myself in a cave “oh my god” I was
actually in a gold mine. I filled my hat with as much gold as I could. I raced
to the black hole. Just then a goblin chased after me. I ran as fast as a
cheetah towards the black hole.
By
Michael
Audience:
5/6J and visitors
Purpose: To
entertain readers
Text type:
Imaginative
The
Black Hole
The sky was still bright
blue as we entered the big, colourful mouth of Luna Park. I wanted to ride the
Mouse. I was very eager to sit on the electric, strawberry pink car. We would
have been on the green Mouse five minutes ago but I was so adamant that we
waited. People had said there was something peculiar about the electric,
strawberry pink car and I wanted to find out.
Lucy sat in the Mouse car
when she gave me a fierce look. “It better be worth this girly car”! She
moaned. I hoped so too, if there was nothing funny about this car, I was in big
trouble. I dropped down onto the seat when the ride had not even started and I
began to sink into the seat! Seconds later I realised I was sinking into a
black hole.
The next thing I knew was
that I was covered in foamy sponge. It was so hard to breathe. Then I realised
that the “peculiar” thing was a black hole in the middle of the seat! I started
to panic when Lucy fell in with a bump. At least I wasn’t in trouble now that
she was experiencing the “peculiar “thing.
The hole was enormous, we
couldn’t get out and the sponge was covering all the black. Lucy and I decided
to rip the sponge and touch all the black we saw so we could identify the black
hole. This sounded like a brilliant plan, but would it work? After searching
for a long time felt a steering wheel. My hand must have come out of the hole.
I told Lucy to hold my
left arm while I gripped on tightly to the steering wheel with my right. I
climbed out and pulled Lucy out. I sat on her lap so we would not fall in
again. This ride was definitely peculiar! We then stepped out of the seat just
as the ride finished. Excellent timing!
By:
Swetha
