Week 4 Journal Entries "The light was so bright..."Please read and leave a comment.

The light was so bright burning through the trees. Everyone on the street was awake exept old grandpa. The  birds were singing on the edge of the branch. The kids across the street were playing their little ball game.The road was clear with no cars at all and  mum yelled out to my brother and I we heard, ''It will be perfect to ride you're bike,'' All we did was shake our heads and yelled back ''No thank you, we are fine!'' We walked across the road to play with the other kids.
Charlotte H

The light was so bright that it could make you blind. I was forced to shut my eyes. I didn't know what it was until I was forced to open them. it was coming from a beaming thing outside of the window. When I opened my eyes I looked straight outside the window, It was still dark though. I was awake was with me. The light had struck my eyes again somebody was with me. The light had struck with bang. I was shocked but when I looked up there was something there. It looked like my sister at the door.
Lilli K  

The light was so bright, I couldn't even see a single thing. I tried to open my eyes, but all I saw was a white background. A couple of minutes later, I opened my eyes again and I saw a lady helping me up. I looked at her again and realised that she was my long lost mother who died when I was just four years old. I ask my mum, "How did you get here mum?" She didn't answer me, but she pointed at a genie from my dreams. I was so happy, I cried and gave her a big hug.
Amber K

The light was so bright when I entered the disco. It was my cousin's birthday party and I was so, so bored everyone was dancing exept for me. My parents were the ones who forced me into going. They thought I needed to get out of the house. I felt so annoyed and irratated that they never listend to me or asked me how I felt when they forced me to do things. I just wanted to tell them that I sometimes felt like they forced me to do things. Afterwards they came up to me and said "Sweety we know that you wanted to go to your friend's sweet 16 so your Dad and I decided you can go there." Mum said "We know that she was going to leave the country tommorow so you can have another day with her." I was so happy and felt that they understanded me. I gave them a great big bear hug and cried out "Thanks!"

Portia.Bal

The light was so bright that I was forced to close my eyes. The light was flashing all kinds of amazing colours, from a golden yellow to a dashing deep purple. I was falling into another dimension and in the distance I heard a peaceful, harmonious harp playing a beautiful tune. As I opened my eyes to look at my surroundings, I saw a gorgeous kingdom above the clouds and a familiar woman was leading around this new world. I heard a voice that summoned me from this paradise. I slowly opened my eyes, only to see my mother peering over me while I was in my bed, begging me to go to school.

Seren

The light was so bright my eyes felt like they were melting. I staggered forward desperately trying to find the source. The light dimmed. I opened my eyes. The dark slowly poured into the room. A candle mysteriously lit. There was a chair, a table and a bible. I sat down, and a thought came into my mind. Look in the bible. Memories could not pour into my mind. A mechanical door opened. A plate slid from the opening. The door closed befor any anylizing could be done. I tried pushing other spots in the room. At last I gave up. I sat and opened the bible. It was no bible, horrifying pictures flooded in my mind.

Wilton

The light was so bright and it was making my eyes ache. As I walked up the stairs the light got dimmer and dimmer and then I saw a yellow and green alien. The alien turned around and saw me I screamed and then I ran back out of the haunted castle. As I pushed the door open, the alien grabbed me and pulled me into the kitchen. "Im not going to let you go until I give you some of my famous alien sausages". "No no I wouldn't want to waste your time" I said. When the alien turned around I quickly ran out of the kitchen, down the stairs and out of the house.

Shantara