Thursday, June 1, 2017

Please read this great story"Dog in a Window"


 

Dog in a window

Last Sunday mum, dad, Bongo (my dog) and I were at home. We were waiting for the shops to open.

 Dog in a Window

Ting!” a loud noise sounded. “Time to go shopping!” shouted dad. “Yay!” I shouted. “Woof woof” barked Bongo. I dilly-dallied all the way to the door, but before I stepped out Bongo barked again, “woof woof!”

We all walked out the door forgetting all about Bongo. Bongo barked with a cheerless heart and started to bark even more as if he was crying. All at once he spied some boxes which looked like stairs and ultimately Bongo inspected something familiar. He ran to have a closer look and climbed up the boxes. He observed a window so he poked his head and waited patiently all day. He waited for ages and ages and hours and hours.

After waiting for three days and three nights, he saw the other owners with their dogs. They were having so much fun. Bongo stated to bark again even more with lot and lots of sadness and a heartbroken heart. Bongo was tearful the whole day.

At night, Bongo stopped barking and heard voices. The voice stopped and suddenly the door opened with a squeaking noise. My parents and I entered. Within a flash Bongo ran to us and greeted us with an overjoyed heart and a delighted bark. We all were happy and learnt to never leave Bongo home and forget him.
 
by Amitya

2 comments:

  1. That was a great story Amitya i loved how you used long words and great adjectives. by Kiara

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  2. Thank you Kiara! That was very nice of you!
    Amitya

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