Friday, June 9, 2017

Please read Hannah's story. It is so good.


Bubbles

It was a Sunday morning and Lucy and I were heading towards the bush blowing big bubbles. We were blowing bubbles because we had nothing else to do. Lucy and I were happily playing with the bubbles when Lucy saw the biggest bubble she had ever seen in her life! She raced to it. The bubble was as big as her but it was floating away quickly. We both ran after it.

We ran into the bush. On the way we got lost.

“Where are we?” asked Lucy shaking.

“I don’t know” I replied. We’re lost Lucy and I sobbed.

Suddenly I saw the bubble again. “The bubble is over there”, I shouted.

Lucy called “fantastic” and we ran to it, but we just fell inside it. As soon as we were inside we couldn’t get out. The bubble had trapped us inside!

We had to get out we just had to. Suddenly the bubble started to move again and it was moving out of the bush.

“Finally” I mumbled.

As soon as the bubble had floated out of the bush it let go of us and we walked happily home.

 

By Hannah                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                          

7 comments:

  1. I really liked writing this story

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  2. that was a great story Hannah I loved your complication I was just a great story.

    By Kiara

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  3. I have almost finished my bubbles story and I had lots of fun.

    By kiara

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  4. I really enjoyed reading your fantastic story so much keep it up!!
    By Jamieson

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  5. I really liked your story Hannah

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  6. I just don't know what to say it is just a fantastic story Hannah.

    By Kiara

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  7. hannah I reeeeaaaally liked your story!
    amitya

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