Monday, October 10, 2016

The Best thing about the holidays was... Week 1 Journal entries. Please read and leave a comment.

WALT: To write a good journal entry.
The best thing about the holidays was when my family and I drove to Muswellbrook. On our trip we stopped at Singleton, Widden and scone. We stayed at a hotel named Noah's Hotel.
The trip took three hours so my sister and I watched movies on the way.
My family and I did a walk around the little country town. I had lots of fun there. We travelled there by car.
Anibal


WALT: write a journal entry that makes sense.
The best thing about the holidays was horse riding. I really like horse riding because it was really fun and I learnt a lot about horses. I travelled there by car with my family friends Valerie and Esther. When we arrived, we learnt how to ride a horse. My horse was called Maccer. Next we learnt how to wash and groom a horse. Then I learnt to feed the horse. The food smelt disgusting.


When we finished we played games on our horse. One of the games were called spin around the world. Spin around the world was the game I hated the most.
Yannis


The best things about the holidays were my 8th birthday. I also liked it when my family drove to Kiama Blowhole. I liked my birthday because I received great birthday presents. My sister gave me three bags of dirt. My birthday cake was shaped as a pirate's head.
Riley
The best thing about the holidays was going to Port Stephens and suburb of Corlette in Nelson Bay. I travelled there with my mum , dad, grandma and two of my friends. We also visited Salamander Bay. it was phenomenal because we saw lots of dolphins.
It took two and a half hours.
Emilia
The best thing about the holidays was the museum. I travelled to the museum because I wanted to see lots of paintings. There names were called Frinda and Diego. I travelled with my Uncle and Auntie and my Mum and Dad. The paintings were beautiful. Sofia 




The  best thing about the holidays were traveling to foster.It is a little town located in Sydney. Our transportation   was by car.it was a three hour drive. Our hotel was called Beaches International. We were there because my grandma's honeymoon was there .We stayed there for five days.
Sabrina


The best thing about the holidays was my family drove to the shops. I travelled to the shops because I was going ice-skating. I fell over ten times. My father told me I was falling over ten times because I was trying really hard. I also thought catching a bus with my brother to watch the movie STORKS was awesome.
Lily




The best thing about the holidays was that, my family and I travelled to Creeks Point Reserve. I travelled to there because I was celebrating Emilia's 8th birthday party. We both played fairies and castles and we ate sausage rolls. I saw the Harbour Bridge.
Ksenia




The best thing about the holidays was when I went to Melbourne to visit my cousins Benji and Leah. We all visited Luna Park. Benji and I got to ride on the ghost train ride. I cried after the ride because
it was scary. After the ghost train all of us wanted to go on the spider ride. it was really fun.
Alexis




 The best thing about the holidays was going swimming at the Aquatic Centre in Ryde. There were big waves and a slide. I learned how to do the front flip in the deep and touching the floor in the deep. My cousins and my family were there. I had lots of fun swimming with my cousins and my brother.
Celine




The best thing about the holidays was when I drove to Kangaroo Valley. At Kangaroo Valley we were sleeping in a tent (camping) and fishing. My family caught no fish. The water was dirty. The place was called Grady's Riverside Retreat. I slept there for two nights and one day. It was three hours to drive there.
Jessica







6 comments:

  1. Good journal entries 2J
    Anibal

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  2. Some people had a fantastic holiday
    Anibal

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  3. what a great holidays recounts I had great at Kingswood Public school love Mrs J and 2J from Kristal williams

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  4. Welcome back 2J. It sounds like you all had a wonderful holiday! -Mr. D

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  5. Good job Emilia and Sabrina. I love your journals!!
    Lily

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