Week 4 Journal entires. The Berst Day of My Life.

Was when I travelled to a beautiful holiday house. It was next to a wonderful beach. I also liked it because the house had a clear clean view from the window. It was at Smiths Lake. I had lots of fun there
Ollen
The best day of my life was in the last holidays when I went to Legoland in Denmark. I learned how to drive a car.
Marc


The best day of my life was going to the U.S.A and having lots of fun.
Thomas


  The best day of my life was when I was in Tokyo in a theme park. The theme park was based on Disney characters. I walked around the park with my cousins and the rest of my family. I sat some amazing rides. I also bought a rabbit bag from the souvenir shop. I had lots of fun there.
Alyssa


The best day of my life was when it was my fifth birthday. I enjoyed my birthday because they played the game I wanted to play. We played duck duck goose first. Then, we ate the cake.
Zoe


The best day of my life was celebrating my cousin's birthday because we had a piece of chocolate cake and played games in the park.
Celine

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Week 3 : The worst day of my life... Please read and leave a comment!

The worst day of my life was last year, when I was at Wet'n'Wild On the Gold Coast .I was waiting to go on the river rapids when my sister pushed my down when the light was still red. I did a humongous splash when I landed in the pool. I was in so much pain but I pulled through it.


Sabrina


The  worst day of my life was last Friday because I started a writing booklet. I have to do one page a day. I'm supposed  to be on my fourth day but I'm on my fifth page.


Ian


The worst day of my life was when my cousin put my favourite toy into the pool. I felt sad and angry.


Celine


The worst day of my life was when I went to the shops with my mum. My mum lost her card for the shops. She had to pay $60 , to get out of the carpark. She got very angry at me. It happened when I was in year 1.


Ollen

Annibal and yannis have written fabulous narratives. Please read and leave a comment.

Text Type: Narrative

Procedure: To entertain the reader

Audience: Year 2J and visitors

The Robot Batteries

There was a submarine moving along the rough and cold ocean floor. The long submarine carried a little boy named Tim. With the five year old boy there was also a friendly and electrifying robot.

While they were under the ocean playing with their plastic toys, the robot´s old batteries accidentally ran out.

Suddenly the robot shut down frantically.

Luckily Tim had two spare batteries that the funny robot could borrow, and he placed the clean batteries carefully back on the robot.

`Oh no’, yelled the worried boy. ‘We don´t have enough batteries´! The robot opened his eyes slowly. Tim and the robot rushed to their onboard base. There they had a miniature submarine stored.

Tim drove while the robot was being an annoying co-pilot. The little submarine had an onboard arm that could grab heavy objects.

`Now all we have to do is find some batteries´. Tim exclaimed contentedly.

`There´s one´ mentioned the anxious robot.

The battery was moving (they didn´t know why).

They just grabbed the battery.

When their path lightened the robot looked backwards.

`Watch out, a bulb-fish´! The alarmed robot gasped.

They tried to trick the ginormous fish.

`Look´ the robot shrieked. 'A narrow path´!

Tim drove through the narrow path with the fish in close pursuit.

The fish crashed into the narrow path, an

 Tim and the robot grabbed the battery.

`We’re safe´! the robot expressed.

Anibal

WALT: To write a good narrative.

Text type: Narrative

Purpose: To entertain the reader

Audience: 2J and Visitors

The Bridge

In Queensland lived two poor boys named James and Jimmy. James and Jimmy were tramps. Their parents died when they were little. The two poor boys were so skinny that they looked like sticks! It was a wet Friday afternoon when Jimmy found a beautiful apple tree.

“Finally Food” Jimmy shouted excitedly.

James ran towards Jimmy and they both gazed at the apple tree.

“Lets go” James cried as he ran towards the bridge that led him to the apple tree.

When James was halfway along the bridge, an ugly, fierce ogre jumped up in front of him.

“This is my bridge and who ever crosses my bridge will be part of my supper”, the ogre roared.

James was terrified. He bowed down to the ogre and cried “ Oh please Mr Ogre please, please, please let me pass, I’m just a little tramp”.

“No, unless you let me be your boss” the ogre shouted furiously.

Without thinking twice James shouted “Yes, be my boss”.

The ogre game a huge grin and let James pass. After gathering all the beautiful apples he gave some to his brother, Jimmy. The apples were delicious. They were sweet.

Years later the ogre started to be nice to them. He gave them delicious food and fashionable clothes. James and Jimmy were so happy, they were never sad again.

Yannis