Thursday, October 12, 2017

This term we are learning how to write persausive texts. Please read these wonderful examples by 2J students.


Should Children Have Mobile Phones?

I strongly believe that children using mobile phones is a very bad idea.

Firstly children could learn bad language. When children enter any texting app, they could sometimes see what strangers say. The strangers could text swear words and children could learn those swear words and say them to their friends.

Secondly mobile phones can cause eye damage. This is because mobile phones have blue light that is more dangerous than any other natural light.

Lastly children can copy the internet and cheat in exams. If they keep this up they will never learn the answers to the question nor will they improve their knowledge.

In conclusion I definitely believe mobile phones should not be in the hands of children.

  By Amitya






Should Children Have Mobile Phones?


I strongly believe that mobile phones should not be in the hands of children.


Firstly a child could be black mailed e.g. a child could text a stranger who she or he doesn’t know and the stranger could tell him or her to give the stranger money or otherwise the person would do something really bad to the child’s family.
Secondly the child could see inappropriate things on the internet, such as some movies that have lots of violence.

 Lastly a child could cheat in class by putting the phone under the table and finding the answers in a test.

 To conclude I am most definite in my belief that children should not bring mobile phones to school.

By Kiara 2J





Should Children Have Mobile  Phones?

I strongly believe children should not use mobile phones without any guardian or adult.

Firstly children should not have mobile because these can easily cause eye cancer in your brain and eyes. It can be painful.

Secondly you can play with phone numbers and accidently phone a random person. The person might even call you to her or his home or to ask you your address and street name.

Lastly in Naplan or tests you might use the internet to find the answer and this is cheating.

 

In conclusion children should not be allowed to own mobile phones.

by Shreya






Should Children Have Mobile Phones?

Children having mobile phones is not a good option for parents as they could do many bad things.

Firstly they may be black mailed and have to pay money or hand over the phone.

Secondly in class when a child is doing a test or an exam they could get full marks from copying answers from the internet.

Lastly they could use it too much and it could cause health issues and eye damage.

In conclusion I strongly believe children should not have mobile phones.

 

By Mathias 2J




 









 

2 comments:

  1. Great persuasive writing 2J as to why kids shouldn't have a mobile phone.
    I enjoyed seeing everyone today after my holiday.
    From Issie

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  2. Great arguments! They have convinced me enough.By Evie
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